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| The two men,and the women see trees uprooted from the ground,so they run as fast as they can.The small english man gets his foot caught in a root in the groung,so the taller man runs back to help him,and shouts at the girl to hide.She hides in the tree branhes and suffers a panic attack.After a narrow escape from whatever that thing was(the smaller man called it a p*ssed off girafe)they walk to the place where chris thought was the direction of the beach,as chris tails silently behind(now i g2g 20 min for dinner)chris continue with the story) |
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By: hofmec_sirch
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Well days pass, and Chris is caugh bye "others". Meanwhile, we meet new suvivors from the front of the plane. Which include kaylee, Nate and others.
They find a beach and meet with jack and co.
Kaylee has just been caught by "others", with Locke and his team in hot persuit! |
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"Kaylee's a very special girl" and with that, Kaylee is stolen by the others.
Locke, Jack and Tim come running into the jungle, in desperate search for Kaylee. Locke stops, so do the others.
"listen" he says.
Kaylee's screams are heard in the distance.
"A trail, over here"
The party follows it further towards the screams, they stumble down a slope, rolling, smashing against the rocks. They all stop at the bottom. Tim is the first up, daised, he looks round then BAM (huge sound effect), There is Kaylee, lifeless, limp.
A voice comes from the jungle: "I told you, to go back, but you crossed the line, Tim. She's dead Tim, and it's on you"
Its Chris, he apears from the jungle.
"You son of a B!tch", points his gun at him.
"You never learn Tim" BANG a gun is fired from behind Chris, hits Jack in the face, he drops dead.
Chris dissapears back into the jungle.
Locke Opens fire with his AK-47 and Tim goes to untie Kaylee. He does so, and they start running back, Kaylee in Tims arms, leaving Jacks body behind.
Eventually, they find a safe place. Tim lays Kaylee down, feels her pulse.
"Shh.... She's alive!" Tim shouts!!!
Locke smiles: "C'mon, lets head back to camp"
Kaylee opens her eyes, looks at Tim, and smiles......
"what happened?" she askes
"Don't worry, all that matters is that you're safe now" Tim replies.... |
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Locke, Tim and Kaylee, speed back to camp, the "others" in hot persuit.
There are at least 20 of them, all with a hand wepon of some sort. The "others" gain on them, Locke, regularly, turning round and fireing towards the "others", a few drop dead, but they push on.....
Suddenly, Sayid and Ana Lucia apear from the bush and open fire on the others killing all. But more come, Locke turns around, and the shoot out begins.
Eventually, Chris appears again: "Get out boys, Leave them"
The "others" stop fireing, dissapearing again into the jungle.
"You Ok?" asks AL
"Yep", Locke replies
"Where's Jack?" Sayid asks
"They shot him, the others" Replies Locke
"So you just left him to die?" asks AL
"Yep" replies Locke
They all burst out in laughter, Chuckling all the way back to the hatch...... |
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They walk into the Hatch, to treat Kaylees wounds.
Nate's down there.
Locke: "nate, get the Bandages"
Nate "Ok"
He wanders to the medical room, turns on the light and.....
"Hello Nate" Comes a fimilliar voice
Its Jack.
"i thought you were dead?" says Nate
"no nate, they lied" he says
Jack pulls out a Knife
"what are you doing?" Nate asks
"I'm going to kill you" Jack replies
He takes a swing At Nate.
"Nooooooo"...... BANG, BANG BANG...... the sound of a AK-47 rings through the Hatch.
Jack stops, Half of his head is blown off, his body kneels then drops dead
Nate turns around- he sees Locke standing behind him, AK-47 steaming for the shots.
"Locke" shouts Nate. |
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By: hofmec_sirch
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.......Jacks corpes lies on the ground.
"what the the hell just happened?????" asks Nate
"I don't know" replies Locke
"W...Wasn't he Dead?" Shivers Kaylee
"Yeah" Says Tim
"We need to get outta here, C'mon" Says Locke
They go out the entrance in the jungle. Locke stands at the Door.
Suddenly, Danielle comes rushing through the jungle.
"where is Sayid?" she asks frantically
"wow, Slow down" Tim replies
"Where is He?" She shouts?
"Down at the beach" says Locke.
The go and find him.
They learn She has caught one of them, an Other.
They go to the trap, she cuts it down. Its Chris.......
"Who are you?" Sayid asks
"He's the Son of a B!tch who Killed jack." says Tim
Locke quietly chuckles to him self.
Chris amerges from the net, "Come out Jack" he shouts
Jack amerges from the jungle.
"Not again" Says Locke
"Now get back, or die" Chris tells them
"No way, Not with out Jack!" says Nate
Locke wispers in Nates ear: "Shut up Nate"
"It's too late for that Nate, he's one of us now" Says Chris
"no way, Get Lost" says Nate
"Well Ok then, get him Jack"
Jack charges forward towards Nate
"NO" Locke screams
He pulls out A sword and jumps out infront of Nate, Chris pulls out his sword as does Jack. The classic sword fight commences. Locke takes on both, swiftly moving, dodging blows, striking back twice as fast as the Others.
He's too good, Chris sees this, backflips out of the fight. Jack is stupid enough to continue fighting. Locke knocks his Sword away, and He swings at Jack.......
Glunk! Jacks head hits the floor, and rolls down the slope into the wilderness.
The headless body stands for a moment knees buckle, then give in and the body hits the ground.
Chris has retreated into the jungle, Jacks dead, yet again......... |
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By: nitro_phnx
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"Are you okay Nate?"John asks
"Yeah,im okay"Nate Replies,as he feels ver drowsy."I think I'm gonna go lie down"
"Okay"John says as he sees Nate brush past him,and a knife sticking out of his back."Nate!You've got a knife in ur back,i better go get Jack!"as he remembered that Jack was no longer living,"I'll have to fix you myself,as he fetches the medicine out of the cupboard.John pulls the knife out of nate's back and bandages it up,"Here's some medicine to calm you down,it's called clonozepan"
Nate takes it with a glass of water and slowly drifts asleep |
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By: nitro_phnx
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| just add that my one is after the fight(and i am now taking on the role of gun firing,sword weiling john locke) |
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By: emille_de_ravin_fan
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| HELLO !!!! im really sorry i never go on this anymore, u all have probably forgotten me and moved on :( |
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By: bubs_4_eva
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| hello? anyone on |
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By: nitro_phnx
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after the amazing low budget sword fight,John and Tim managed to capture chris again and locked him into the hatches armory,suddenly static comes through the speakers and Locke tells Chris to be quiet so he can hear suddednly numbers countdown on the speakers,
"10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1
All of a sudden,large blast doors come down.With all off Lockes thinking,he quickly slides a toolbox,which was conveiniently place close the the blast doors for no apparent reason,whinh stops the doors closing
"What's going on John?"asks chris
"Some king of blast doors just came down"Locke replied
"Blast doors,what do you mean?"
"I dont know,ive only just.."Locke was interupted by the computers timer beeping
"John,what's that beeping noise?"
"It's nothing Chris"Locke ensures as he tries to lift open the doors,but they don't budge.
"Chris,i need your help,can you help me?"
"Sure John,just let meout and ill see what i can do"
Locke let chris out of the armory,and togeher they used a steele pole to lift up the door by a fraction.John,without thinking,tried to slide himself under the doors.
"Uh,John,i don't think that's a really good idea,u should wait until..BOOM.The steele pole bent making the door come down even more,peircing through John's leg.
"AARRGGHH!!"John cried in pain."Chris,u need somwthing to stop the pressure,use those dumbell weights over there. Chris slid the weights under the blast door and the pressure was lifted by a fraction of John's leg. The beeping was getting faster.
"Listen,Chris,in that room,there's a computer,and we need to press that computer's button every 108 minutes because...John told chris the whole story,and told him that there was a vent that he could climb through to reach the button,Chris went to climb up the vent,but fell down,knocking him unconsious for several minutes.When he awoke,he tried it again,and dissapeared from John's sight. At that time John had a flashback on how Jack was killed and taken by the others.(next page) |
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By: billy_slaters_chik
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| hello everyone. |
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By: billy_slaters_chik
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| its l0ving_l0st with my old account. |
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By: bubs_4_eva
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| o hi.. give me lik 10 mins im a slow reader and want to read this story that brandons written |
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By: nitro_phnx
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we see john full army style with his AK-47 shooting the others,he is back to back with Jack,and are quickly becoming engulfed with the endless numbers of other surrounding them.Locke decideds to run,he can see a clear path,and shouts to Jack to run there,but not loud enough,Locke runs,and turns around,to see Jack's body filling with lead.Locke didn't have to think twice and ran the hell out of there,the other's on hot pursuit.(Flashback end)John is crying,blaming himself for Jack's death,if only he shouted louder,maybe even nudged him,Jack wouldnt be..RRIIIIEEEEOOOO! RRRIIIEEEEEOOOO!,the alarm!That means Chris has 20 seconds to push the button,or....or....well i don't want to find out,John thought to himself.Major alarm now,10 seconds,come on Chris,you can do it,NOOOO! he hasn't pressed it!I can hear the engine like thing starting up!It's the end of the world for us!No,wait!It's Stopped!YES!Chris pushed the button,maybe hes not an other after all.John thought inside his subconciouse.
The blast door lifted.No sign of Chris.The timer at 107 minutes.Chris comes out of the vent and lifts John to the bed.At that moment,Charlie,Ana Lucia and cast burst into the hatch with the news of that the found the balloon chris 'supposedly' crashed here on.Interrogation continues.(Heya Abby!Nice to c u,heard that you broke up with pablo.So sad:( im off to go watch prison break,house,Ncis and 24.Cya guys!don't change the story.Or Else.I mean it.) |
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By: nitro_phnx
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hey Abby,hey Kelly,Hey Emer nice to see u all!im leaving now but ill be on tomorrow until around 7:30,see u then
Namaste
Nitro |
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By: billy_slaters_chik
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| k cya later Brandon |
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By: bubs_4_eva
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| rite finished lol...bye brandon...good story...maby i will be in it nxt time lol |
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| ...lol |
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By: bubs_4_eva
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| so wat ya doin |
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| so wat ya doin.... i g2g bye |
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| sorry, cya kelly |
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"How many of you are there?" Sayid shouts
"I don't........what are you talking about?" Chris whines
"How many of you are there, your people?"
"I was part a search party looking for Henry Gale!, he was already dead, when we found him....I....."
"Tell me, Chris, how did he write a note to his wife with a broken neck?"
Sayid pulls out a note of money, and he reads a note from henry.......
"So chris, i'll ask you again.... How many of you are there?" he shouts! he pulls out his 9mm
"I don't...... I can't..... he'll....." Chris pleads.
"He...." Ana Lucia appears from behind Sayid "The guy with the beard?" she continues....
"Him...." Chris replies, almost laughing "he's nothing, no-one!"
"Who is he?, How many of you are there? How long have you been here?" Sayid shouts again.
"I can't tell you" Chris replies
"WHY CAN'T YOU TELL ME?"
"He'll kill me"
"I'LL KILL YOU" he loads his gun. "You have 3 seconds to tell me, 1......2......3"
BANG! The bullet strikes the wall above Chris, Ana Lucia has used her cop skill to deflect the shot and hold up Sayid.
"Are you crazy?" she says. "we need the bullets for you know who"
"ok" Sayid replies. He leaves the room.
"Thank you" says chris
"SHUT UP" says Ana, and she slams the door...... |
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"What happened?" Asks Locke.
"It's under control john!" says Ana.
Meanwhile, Hurley and Libby are having a good time, but they see someone who's not there! No not Dave, but jack.
"Dude, aren't you suposed to be dead"
"No Hurley, you made that up, i'm here!" Jack throws a coconut at Hurley.
"OK dude i heard you the first time"
"Listen Hurley, i need to see John" says Jack.
"Oh ok dude, ah he's in the hatch!"
"Thanks Hurley"
"No worries dude!" Jack runs off towards the hatch.
We see Locke sleeping in the hatch bed. Suddenly we see jack come up behind him, hands out streched. Hes going to strangle him.......
But Locke wakes up, secretly, and Jack doesn't know....... He grins....
As soon as Jack touches him, he springs up, knocks Jack with his crotches and pulls out his Ak-47.
"Eat lead" Bang bang bang! the sound of a rifle rings through the hatch...
Jack falls to the floor, lifeless.
"What was that?" Chris shouts
"Nothing, it was only Jack" replies john
"Oh ok"
He walks over towards the armoury..... and opens the door.
"Who are you, Chris, if thats your name?"
No reply
"I did you get caught on perpose?"
"Why would i put my self through this, all this?"
"I mean your people have been here, for god knows how long........"
"God wouldn't know!" he interupts "God, wouldn't have any better idea of where this place is, than anyone in the world"
Locke is bewillderd by Chris's coment....but he continues
"Maybe, your people, wanted to find this place"
"This place is a joke, John, I never pushed your button"
"Your lieing"
"No, i'm done lieing john"
"No, no."
"yahuh"
"no way"
"yes way"
"u can't be"
"Oh i can be John"
"oh yeah, well you know how u told me about your trade, well, i'm going out there, and trading Sawyer with your people. And when we get Walt back, you might have been all the trouble!"
"We'll never give you walt back"
But Locke is out the door, on another adventure!!!!! |
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