By: mj_angus
26/05/2008
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Check it out if you are bored and let me know what you think:
You have to close the gap in the link between the 'l' in Michael and the '/'.
http://newformsreview.com/newmedia/Angus%20Michael /Hypertext%20Essay/ |
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By: melislost4815162342
27/05/2008
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| That is really good. And i may be a bit bias, but all your aruments were great, makes me love the show even more. |
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By: bubs4eva@y7mail.com
27/05/2008
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its good, love the little smokey thing too!
the arguements and reasons where great!
what are you studying to be? |
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By: mj_angus
27/05/2008
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| Thanks, I'm in my third year of a communication degree. I would like to get into film & television one day in some capacity. Writing, producing etc. |
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By: desmonds_eye
28/05/2008
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| haha dude i did one as well, but im in first year, and i have to say thats pretty simplistic for a 3rd year task. id like to go to the uni youre at |
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By: melislost4815162342
28/05/2008
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| That sounds like such an awesome Job, hope you get there, i rekon you would be great. |
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By: lost_lover_for_ever
28/05/2008
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| i cnt find it....:( |
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By: cookz86
5/06/2008
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hey man i jus read that. gotta say good on ya for doin it on lost.
question though.... if its an essay shudnt it be alot more detailed? like wat marks did u get cos it did seem bit like wat a yr9 kids wud do. |
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By: snuh17
10/06/2008
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Your structure is poor and clumsy. Your arguments are weak and simply repeating "Lost is the best show on television" doesn't make it so. You need stronger arguments for and against the show and you must link these arguments together so there is constant flow in your essay. Try pointing out why having a large ensemble cast is not always beneficial for a serialised drama. Some character stories have to be abandoned because having such a large ensemble cast means there is not always sufficient air time for particular characters. Look at Libby for example, she is a mysterious character who has appeared in multiple flashbacks yet we still do not even know her last name.
Sorry if I'm being too harsh but it certainly seems as though a high school student has wrote this up, not a third-year university student. |
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