By: thebaboonjedimonkeythingy
7/03/2009
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| I agree. The suspense is so... suspensful |
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By: lostoholic_fan
7/03/2009
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Did Oceanic Flight 815 crash on the island...from a simple computer?
Has Kelly stopped the time-shifts...forever?
and which time are they in now, that will put them all in mortal danger.
OH MY....
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By: bubs_luvs_kelly
9/03/2009
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| lol the 'oh my' reminded me of Kyol and Brett |
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By: lostoholic_fan
9/03/2009
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"Your crew, you couldn't have just sailed that ship yourself" he laughed.
"They...they all died...they went down with the ship" Kelly whispered. |
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By: lostoholic_fan
9/03/2009
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| Soz guys, ignore that last post, consider it a lil sneak peek. |
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By: lostoholic_fan
9/03/2009
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An egg cracked over the frying pan as someone wiped the sleep out of their eye and flicked it way.
As the pan sizzled, they reached into the fridge and pulled out 'Dharma Fruit Juice' and poured a glass on the counter.
As they flopped the egg onto a plate and the toast popped they went over to their dining room table.
A knock at the door suddenly stopped the person from sitting down, as they opened the door it was revealed to be Kelly.
"What is it?" she asked.
"Sorry to disturb you Ella but we have word that hostiles are attacking the pearl station".
"Damn it" she whispered, getting her dharma jumpsuit she zipped it up as it said 'Head of Security'.
"Bring the van around and load it up with the tear gas package, there can be no mistakes this time, alarm the-" the man next to her was suddenly shot with a fire arrow. As Dharma people began to scream and run into the houses, Kelly screamed "Stop! please!".
As they did not stop, Kelly bolted back into her house and locked the door. Running to her bedroom she quickly tried to enter a code that would shield all the doors and windows from outside interfearance.
Suddenly, a woman smashed through the window, with a sharp carved stick she held it to Kelly's neck.
"Kelly?" the woman asked.
As Kelly turned around she saw a horrible looking Kezrach.
"Oh my god" she whispered.
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Kelly woke up in what looked like a holding area for criminals.
"Hello" a man suddenly said watching her.
She lifted her eyes and saw a total stranger, but Srsen to us.
She ignored him and looked away.
"How did you get here...how did you come onto this island?" he asked.
"I..." she hesitated.
"I got here from a...ship delivering the P *** ls too....Fiji" Kelly answered.
"Wheres your ship?" he asked.
"I abandonded it right before it sunk a few hours ago" she answered quickly trying not to come off too confused.
"Where's the rest of your crew?" he asked.
"What?" she asked ... |
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By: lostoholic_fan
9/03/2009
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I'm not telling where I've been...
ahh so you got a secret agenda...
I've tried to leave this island for as long as I can remember it feels as though its been a lifetime...
LMBS. |
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By: lostoholic_fan
9/03/2009
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"Your crew...what happened to the rest of them?" he asked.
"They..." she hesitated once again and swallowed back tears, she couldn't risk getting her friends in danger, even though she knew it would happen sooner or later, because Dino's people were on the island and had no idea what was happening with the timeshifts.
"They died, they went down with the ship, I floated in the water a couple of days and now I'm here" she said.
"You seem too look pretty healthy for a person whose been floating out at sea for a few days" he said.
"Whats the big deal, why can't I just go home?" Kelly asked acting naive and trying to act as though she didn't know where she was.
"You can never go home" he said.
"What is your name?" he asked once again.
Kelly hesitated than suddenly said "Ella".
"Does that Ella have a last name?" he asked.
"Ella...Tillian..." Kelly said.
"Hi Ella, I'm Srsen".
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"Basically the Dharma Initiative is an experimentational group that performs certain experiments on this island, away from civilization" Srsen said walking around with Kelly introducing her to the island, like she'd never been there.
"Why this island?" she asked.
"Because...this island...is special" he said.
"Now...we don't have many positions available yet...but you can start at the bottom" he said handing her a jumpsuit saying 'OMH Janitor'.
"Who's OMH?" she asked.
"A man that used to work here" he said trying to change the subject quickly.
"You can get started washing the latrines, Lostchess will be there to give you more instructions, than I'll come back and find you and get you settled into your home" he said walking away.
"And Ella...welcome to The Dharma Initiative".
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By: studzy8
9/03/2009
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| That "oh my" was very appropriate..... |
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By: thebaboonjedimonkeythingy
10/03/2009
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| Story's hawt :) |
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By: lostoholic_fan
10/03/2009
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"What are you doing here?" Kezrach asked shutting the door quickly.
"What am I doing here?! I think I can ask you the same question!" Kelly said.
"Shh!" Kezrach whispered.
"The others, where are they? are they safe? Studzy, Emer Dino?" Kelly quickly asked.
"There's no time for that, Kelly did you stop the time-shift?" Kezrach asked.
"It's been 3 years and we haven't had one I think I well and truly did" Kelly said.
"3 years?...has it really been that long?" Kezrach looked out the window and saw fighting between the hostiles and The Dharma Initiative blaze in the middle of a large field.
"I can't do this anymore Kelly" Kezrach said.
"What are you talking about?" Kelly asked comforting her.
"I can't live a lie...no one is coming back for us, they're gone!" Kezrach yelled.
"Shh Kezrach, isn't that all the more reason to keep living it, we're in serious danger here, and even if we did go back home...nothing that we know and love would even exist yet" she said.
"I don't want to leave Kelly, this is my home now, this is where the love of my life died, is 3 years long enough to move on from that?" Kezrach asked.
"I don't know" Kelly replied.
"Look we don't even know whether they're coming back for us so-" Kezrach said.
"Don't talk like that" Kelly said.
"They are coming back" she continued.
"THEY'RE NEVER COMING BACK!" she yelled.
Kelly and Kezrach stood awkwardly, "I have to go" Kezrach said.
"I'm so sorry" Kelly began to cry.
"It was never meant to be like this" she continued as she reached out to hug her.
As Kezrach pulled away "Well it did".
Kezrach ran out of the house back to her group and yelled "Clear!".
Kelly shrunk back into the corner of her room and began to cry "I need to bring them back".
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By: bubs_luvs_kelly
11/03/2009
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That was awsome Losto!...
but i quick thought just flashed to my head.. Im still anmed bubs arint I? I'm not Kelly.. thats the other kelly...
My characteris off this island atm right? just thought I'd ask... coz if I am meant to be Kelly I'll have to read through it all again with a whole new perspective lol.
Keep up the good work =) |
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By: lostoholic_fan
11/03/2009
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| haha bubs, no, your Bubs, off the island with your son Tommy, and Kelly Kalani is still trapped on the island. |
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By: thebaboonjedimonkeythingy
11/03/2009
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| haha, awesome story, keep it up man :P Am I Tommy's father? I kinda cant keep track :P |
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By: lostoholic_fan
11/03/2009
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| Yes as far as you all know...Bubs and Luke you had a baby together...on the island you had a bit of bowchikabowwow....lol... |
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By: thebaboonjedimonkeythingy
11/03/2009
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:O I HAD A BOWCHICKAWOWOW!
WOW! |
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By: bubs_luvs_kelly
12/03/2009
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lol I thought so..
A KID!! I dont remember that! hahaha |
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By: thebaboonjedimonkeythingy
12/03/2009
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| Yeh... I am kinda 14 :P Isnt it kinda... illegal? or some such? :P And Bubs is also an adolescent :P |
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By: bubs_luvs_kelly
12/03/2009
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hah thats a lil awkward.. im 16
LOL!
im off to bed... nite nite! |
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By: thebaboonjedimonkeythingy
12/03/2009
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Well, Technically im 15, birthday soon :P
Your in year... 11? Thats hawt... caz im in year 10... Im kwl with that:P haha
Awkward... :P Well... its kinda to late for awkward no... i think we did the deed a year ago in Losto's timeline :P Specially if you have a baby :P |
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By: bubs_luvs_kelly
13/03/2009
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haha yeahhhh
lol |
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By: thebaboonjedimonkeythingy
13/03/2009
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Actually... i take it back
it is awkward :P |
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By: lostoholic_fan
14/03/2009
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A woman suddenly gasped as she hit the jungle floor all of a sudden, from falling out of the sky.
"Oh my god" she whispered.
She tried to whisper something but struggled.
"T-T-" after vomiting she whispered "Tommy".
Bubs got to her feet and said "I'm back".
"Bubs! help! Bubs!" she heard someone yelling.
She got up and bolted through the jungle until she came to a clearing with a river, she suddenly saw floating in the river, Jedi, who was drowning.
"I can't swim!" he yelled.
Bubs dived into the water, rescuing Jedi and dragging him to the side of the river, to dry land.
"Are you ok?" she asked.
"Are we back?" he asked.
"I think so" she said.
"Are we the only ones it took?" Jedi said looking around.
"I don't know, but I need to find Tommy" she said getting up and starting to walk.
"This island looks no different than 3 years ago" Jedi said.
The two hiked through the jungle looking for any sign from anyone.
"Stupid heels!" she yelled taking them off and throwing them away.
"I told you not to wear them" Jedi said.
"Ow!" someone suddenly yelled.
The two suddenly freezed and saw someone in raggedy clothing step out of the jungle, Emer.
"Oh my god...Emer".
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Emer suddenly pulled out a gun and aimed it at the both of them "Woh! sh.it! Emer its us! do you remember? Oceanic Flight 815!" Bubs yelled.
"Shut up!" she yelled.
"Whose in charge here?" she asked staring at both of them.
"Emer...its us..?" Bubs looked strangely at her.
Emer looked confused.
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"Kelly!" Studzy yelled in unison with Kezrach and Emer, as Dino rocked back and forth in a fetal position.
Studzy glanced back and saw him doing this, he suddenly punched him down.
"Woh! Studzy!" Emer said holding him back.
"Where the hell is she?! is she with your people!?" Studzy asked. |
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By: bubs_luvs_kelly
14/03/2009
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I'M BACK!!!!!!!!
woooootttt!
hahah
that was wiked...
Last bit was a little confusing though.
good job
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By: thebaboonjedimonkeythingy
14/03/2009
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Awesome :)
When you say Jedi, are you referring to me? :P Ive forgotten. |
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