By: lostoholic_fan
4/02/2008
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| Hi this is a new story coming soon written by me, it'll involve a few of the regular, popular message board users, and it'll tell the story of their crash on the Lost Island. Hope you enjoy. |
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By: klweston75
4/02/2008
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| why is it that the popular ones get into your story? what about the rest of us? lol |
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By: lostoholic_fan
4/02/2008
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| no i didn't mean "popular" i meant regular users who come on here ALOT pretty much everyone will be in there but certain people will be in it more than others. |
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By: klweston75
5/02/2008
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| I was joking... |
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By: lostoholic_fan
5/02/2008
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| Ok............... |
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By: lostoholic_fan
5/02/2008
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***WARNING***
Before reading know that this is entirely fictional, these characters are NOT like this in real life.
Enjoy. |
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By: jedi_baboon_not
5/02/2008
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| Why aren't you at school Losto......didn't the holidays finish like a week ago |
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By: lostoholic_fan
5/02/2008
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| It's a carnival and I didn't have to go :-) lol. |
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By: jedi_baboon_not
5/02/2008
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| Gee life's tough for some.....lol |
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By: loocy_lastik
5/02/2008
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| Seems to be raining EVERYWHERE except SA today. Better a 'creative writing' class than a carnival in the rain, hey losto? |
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By: lostoholic_fan
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***Chapter 1***
“Oh my god! Help me!” Losto heard screams of terror and pain in the distance.
His voice was impaired and his body was metaphorically dead.
He began to panic and breath loudly and deeply.
He got himself up to his feet and saw the jungle surrounding him everywhere.
“Oh my god…where am I?”.
***FLASHBACK***
Losto sat comfortably in the seat of his plane Oceanic Flight 815, he saw a young woman sitting next to him from the aisle.
“Flying alone?” the woman asked.
“Yes, I’m meeting my parents in LA, you?” Losto asked.
“Job interview” the woman answered.
“All the way to LA for a job interview?” Losto asked.
“It’s a big job” the woman said.
“What’s your name?” the woman asked.
“I’m not allowed to give my name to strangers, sorry” Losto said.
“Oh I’m sorry” the woman said.
Losto, feeling guilty held out his hand and said “Hi I’m Losto Fan, and you?”.
“I’m Kezrach”.
Nice too meet you, they shook hands when suddenly the plane jolted to one side.
There was a ding sound and a woman’s voice came over the speaker saying “Good afternoon passengers the captain has turned on the fasten seat-belt sign please return to your seats”.
Losto nervously buckled his seatbelt and started breathing loudly.
“Don’t worry this kind of stuff happens all the time” Kezrach said.
“Really?” Losto asked.
“Ofcourse! Don’t worry it’s going to be over-“ suddenly the plane took a jolt as suitcases and people were thrown onto the roof.
“Ah!” Losto screamed as he saw Kezrach grabbing hold of her oxygen mask.
Losto tried to reach for his but his seatbelt was so tight he couldn’t reach.
“Damn it!” he yelled.
He saw someone’s arm reach across and put it over his mouth, it was Kezrach.
They looked at eachother and heard the horrible sound of the back of the plane ripping off.
“AHHH!”.
***ON THE ISLAND***
Losto ran through the jungle towards the screams and the sounds of explosions.
He saw a beautiful beach, and to complete it, a beautiful ocean.
He looke ... |
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By: lostoholic_fan
5/02/2008
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looked left and right, then left again when he saw the ruins of a plane crash.
“Oh my god help me!” Losto saw a man stuck under a piece of the wing from the plane.
“Please help me!” he screamed.
Losto ran over and kneeled down to him.
“What’s your name?” he asked.
“M-M-Mega!” he stuttered.
“Your going to be alright” Losto said.
Losto began to lift the small piece of wing off of his legs.
“Ah!” he yelled in pain.
“I’m sorry!” Losto yelled as he finally lifted the whole piece off of his leg.
Losto looked around and saw everyone helping each other.
He saw a woman run into the jungle a woman run into the jungle holding her hands together.
“Hey! Wait!” Losto yelled.
Losto saw the woman rubbing her wrists and crying.
“Are you ok?” he asked.
“Uh yeah, you?” the woman asked.
“Yeah, what’s your name?” Losto asked.
“McD, you?”.
“Losto”.
“Where are your parents?” McD asked.
“They weren’t…they weren’t on the…plane” Losto began to cry, but then stopped.
“I’m sorry” McD said.
“Yeah…me too” Losto said.
“Where…are we?” Losto asked.
“I don’t know, but the rescue will come soon” McD said.
“How do you know?” Losto asked.
“Well they will know we went down wouldn’t they?” McD asked.
“I don’t know” Losto said.
“It’ll be ok” McD said.
“I know….wait a minute, what were you coming into the jungle for?” Losto asked. |
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By: kezrach
5/02/2008
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| Oooo, what is McD up to? |
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By: lostoholic_fan
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“What are you talking about?” McD asked.
“There was just a plane crash and instead of helping other people you ran into the jungle, why?” Losto asked.
“I was going to the bathroom” McD said.
“When there had just been a plane crash?” Losto asked.
“Do I have to explain myself to a 13 year-old!” McD said.
“Look I’m sorry I…..did I tell you I was 13?” Losto asked.
“No…but I guessed by your, your height and your…weight?” McD said itching her ear.
“Uhh ok…” Losto said.
As night took it’s toll on the island the survivors gathered around a campfire made by Kezrach and Lostchess.
“You think they’d have come by now…” Mega said.
“Who?” Losto asked.
“Anyone” Mega said.
“They’ll come soon, they have to, I mean they know where we are, right?” Losto asked.
“Uh yeah, sure they do” Mega said patting Losto’s back.
“Where’s the doctor?” Losto asked.
“Titch? He’s over there with that injured woman” Mega answered.
Losto approached Titch as the injured woman began to ramble something repeatedly.
“What’s she saying?” Losto asked.
“I don’t know, she’s in shock” Titch said.
“I have to go get some water, stay here with her” Titch said.
“No! I can’t!” Losto yelled.
The woman continued to ramble.
“I- I don’t understand you” Losto said.
The woman grabbed him by the collar and said “Thousand Miles off course, emergency landing…Fiji…they…have no…no idea where…where we are”.
Losto pulled away from her as Titch arrived back.
“What did she say to you?” Titch asked.
“She…She said we were….” |
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By: lostoholic_fan
5/02/2008
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“A thousand miles off course!” Kezrach yelled.
“Fiji?” Mega asked.
“They have no idea where we are!” Losto yelled.
“Now everyone just calm down they have to know where we are and they will be on their way as we speak!” Titch yelled.
“They don’t Titch! They don’t know where to look!” Losto yelled.
“Look I-“ suddenly, in the jungle, there was a loud stomping noise.
The survivors all got up and huddled together.
As the stomping noise began to differ all around the jungle the survivors heads turned in every direction.
“Terrific” Jedi said. |
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By: eedrah24
5/02/2008
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meanwhile unbeknownst to the survivors a man called Eedrah sits in a hatch by himself listening to hippy music and munching out on prepackaged foodstuffs
"mmmmm...peanut butter" says Eedrah |
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By: lostoholic_fan
5/02/2008
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| All in good time Eedrah..lol. |
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By: klweston75
5/02/2008
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| Wasn't that Ep01S01? Great memory... |
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By: lostaholic_fan
5/02/2008
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| Your all a-holes |
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By: lostaholic_fan
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| Lost season 4 is so almost here! |
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By: lostoholic_fan
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| Oh joyful, I've been imposterised. I feel so special. |
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By: klweston75
5/02/2008
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yeah only 2 days till the start of S04... But tonight C7 @8:30 we have the clip show Past, Present & Future.
for those of us fans that may have missed something or the newbies who want to catch the obsession that we all know & love.
Great way to start to get us in the mood for S04!
& what a blast to start off with. you'll be on the edge of your seats for this first one! |
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By: lostoholic_fan
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| Yeah thing I might tune in. lol. |
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By: i_am_a_jedi_not_a_baboon4
5/02/2008
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Lost...
Can I be the equivalent of Sawyer? Who everyone hates and is funny but does bad stuff... Eg Try to be up the suspect terrorist *Cough* JJJ *Cough*
Then Kate can torture me when im naughty :P |
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By: i_am_a_jedi_not_a_baboon4
5/02/2008
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| Ill write my own center episode. Im good at it. Lol |
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