By: bubs_4_eva
14/04/2008
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âAh no, Iâm fine with itâ replied Losto to the question Jedi had asked
âWell if you change your mind you can bring Brett and his sister around and weâll talk about itâ Losto nodded |
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By: bubs_4_eva
14/04/2008
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| why cant it just... work.... |
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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Episode 2- fight and flight
kelly and kyol sat at the top of a bunch of crates. kelly was just lounging around and kyol was sitting upright watching the younger kids playing ps2. it was a little chily but the kookaburras where still laughing.
kelly and kyol suddenly sat upwards and the kids turnd
"did you hear that?" asked kyol
"yea" answerd kelly
"what is this? twin intuition?" asked jjj
kelly and kyol looked at each other.
"its nothing" said kelly "hey kids come here" they all troted up to her and she whisperd in there ears and then said;
"i want yous to go up stairs and grab that game" they all nodded and ran up the stairs. kelly and kyol both stood up and looked each other they then turned to face the crates near the entrance. kelly turned to kyol and nodded kyol then took a step forward and raised his arms in the air after a second he tensed his arms and ligtning came shooting out of his fingre tips and hit the walls and some of the crates. a few armed men jumped up and shook there hands to relive the pain of the electrcution.
"i got it now, make sure the kids got the exit open" said kelly
"make there heads spin" said kyol as he pulled the fingre at the cops and ran for the stairs at the back of the factory/shed
some of the police raised there guns at kyol as he ran "OI!" shouted kelly, they all turned "come and get me" they all startd taking steps forward and she ran to the side of the room |
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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"where you going? im over here" she teased they took steps to the side and she ran to the other side "are you blind? im over here" they all lookd confused and some startd runnin for her. she ran to the back of them "you have big butts and i can not lie!" she half sang. one of the cops turned to run for her but was striked down with lightning. kelly looked up to see kyol on the stairs.
"noting lethal" she said and he smiled. he startd tauntin them by striking in front of there feet whilst kelly taunted a few others by running around them and making them lost and dizey until one pulled out a gun and shot it in the air, kyol quickly zaped the gun out of his hands and kelly and kyol desided it was time to go so kelly distracted them whilst kyol ran up the stair, and then kelly joind him seconds later at what lookd like a mini cool room on the ground. kyol opend it and climbed inside sliding down, kelly followed him seconds later and then poped outinto the sunshine a few seconds after that where the 3 kids where waiting axiously.
"whats happend?" askd lochlan
"we heard gunfire" added jjj
"its ok, just go" answerd kyol as he picked up lochlan and kelly picked up mikaela
"we've got to get to the doctor that called you" said kelly to kyol
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luke and losto sat in the room quietly whilst the younger kids played in the background
"hmm im thirsty." said losto sounding bored
"me too, " said luke
"ill go get us a water bottle then" said losto tiredly
as he walkd down the stairs he could hear the chatter between the travelers and emer. when he got to the bottem and went around the corner her could see them. he saw eedrah, then emer and once emer moved to the left he saw mega and stopped in his traks, widend his eyes and then bolted up the stairs.
"what was that?" askd mega |
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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"one of the kids" emer grunted
losto bursted back into the room at the end of the hall
"ahh did you forget something?" asked luke sarcastically
"hes here" replied losto out of breath
"whos here?" asked luke
"the guy that guy was talking about"
"that made alot of sence"
"ahh, that guy that called us a couple of days ago, about US and sent us that picture of the guy who hunts people like US, yea well the guy in that photo is here! the hunter!"
"what?! here!? are you sure?!"
"positive! saw him myself!"
"did you..." luke was cut off by emer bursting through the door
"what are yous doing running up and down the stairs like monkeys?!" she said as she confronted losto and luke
"hes here emer! the one we where told about!" panicked losto
"what?! where?"
"downstairs you where just talking to him!" replied losto. emer looked a little confused and luke startd going through his pockets
"here look!" luke pulled out a peice of paper and handed it to emer
"omg.. thats mega, we've got to get yous out of here" emer said
emer flicked her hand towards the window and it opend
"i'll be back in a minute, stay here and quiet, if they come in just act normal and take them to another room" explaind emer, they both nodded
"hey emer! dont get seen!" said one of the kids at the back of the room.
"i wont" winked emer then she ran for the window, jumped and flew off somewhere else
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"nice painting" said eedrah
"yea, i like how its got the, ah, the..things there and the, ahh..... yea it looks good" replied mega
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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"hey brett! wana play catch?" asked charlie in there backyard
"you? wana play catch?" asked brett suspeciously
"care to join?"asked charlie, brett just got up sluggishly and joind her in the middle of the yard. charlie bounced the ball once in her hand and then lifted her arm the throw it when emer landed in the middle of them
"woah!" exclaimd brett
"we have a problem, and i need your help" said emer. emer spent the next minute haistly explaining the situation at the motel/hotel and she was very clear on the fact that she might be over reacting
"i usally wouldnt ask for help, id do it myself, but becuas eim not completely sure and we could be over reacting i think i should stay at the motel, at least until my mum gets back in a hour or so. because she would never forgive me if i was all wrong and gave our place a bad name. please will you take them to him!" emer finished
"you dont need to beg, we'll be happy too" said brett looking at charlie as she gave him the look of approval.
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"it only takes 30seconds to get there, shes been gone... 7minutes!" worried luke
emer and charlie came flying through the window closely followd by brett and his dodgy landing
"you got this?" ask emer to charlie
"yea go, before he gets suspecious, and be safe!" answerd charlie
"hey! pyro boy" greeted brett to losto as they gave a firey high 5
"nice to see you brimstone!"
"god i hate that name" laughed brett
"ok emer said only to take yous to(refering to luke and losto) the rest of you have to stay quiet all right? no telling anyone what they acn do" charlie told the rest
"ok lets go" said brett grabing losto and charlie grabed luke as they took off out the window. |
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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Episode 2- fight and flight: part 2
âSARAH! Your mothers here!â screamed loocy from the front door
âOk!â she screamed from upstairs
Loocy opened her front door to see a lady out the front
âHey loocyâ
âHey microâ
âHow was she? Well behaved?â
Loocy rolled her eyes and nodded
âWay better then my kidâ replied loocy
âMisbehaving again? You know it may just be because heâs got less of his father these daysâ suggested micro
Loocy nodded as she turned to watch Sarah run down the stairs with her backpack. When she reached the bottom loocy kissed her on the head
âBe good and Iâll see you next timeâ she said. Sarah nodded and looked up at her mum
âHey darling⦠go wait in the car ok Iâll be there in a minuteâ micro and loocy watched her trot off to the car parked on the side of the road. âI got a phone call the other day from this man, loocy, he said to careful because thereâs a guy out there tracking people like us down⦠tracking us down and killing us.â Micro warned
âI know. I got that phone call too. He gave me the address to his safe house as wellâ loocy explained
âYou going to go?â asked micro
âIf I need toâ
There was a bit of a silence
âWell, ill see you in a few weeks or somethingâ said micro as she turned to depart
âOk then... Be safe and call if anything happens!â replied loocy as she waved goodbye.
Loocy let out a sigh of relief as she sat and absorbed the silence on her couch when she remembered she still had another kid in the house. She closed her eyes and relaxed for another few seconds but eventually fell asleep, she woke up 10 minutes later and looked at the time that was located under the TV, sheâd been asleep for 22minutes. Loocy rubbed her hands on her face and sat up and looked into the TV where she saw a tall darkly dressed man towering over her. She jumped up and turned around quickly where she saw the man staring at her, his face was too shade ... |
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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| oooooooookay then its just part 2 that it dosnt want to post.. lets try ep 3 |
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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Episode 3- Safety Amongst Strangers
A wolf walks through the bush sniffing after every step. The wolfâs hair shortened into its skin and its hind legs straightened and grew until he transformed into a child.
âThereâs no one for a few Ksâ said jjj
âOk thenâ replied Kyol
âWe should be there in 10ks anywayâ added Kelly
âWell can the kids walk? There bloody heavyâ Kyol asked as he put Lachlan down
And they continued to walk through the bush and scrub, still a little anxious about being found.
Losto, Luke, Charlie and Brett hovered above a parking lot watching and waiting for some movement. They lowered to see through a window and Brett sore a shadow figure.
âShould we go in then?â asked Losto
âI feel like Iâm losing gripâ added Luke
âDo think youse could hold on for another 5 minutes?â asked Brett, they nodded but didnât look to sure
A silver family van skids as it goes around a corner a little over the speed limit
âMum your going really fast!... did we do the right thing by leaving him there?... Who was he mum? What did he want?â asked Tyler from the middle seat of the middle row
âI donât know Tyler! Please! Just be quietâ replied Loocy to Tyler
The car fell silent until she skidded around another corner.
âIâm so sorry about that, they shouldnât be any more troubleâ said Emer to Eedrah. Emer gazed around the room
âWhereâs Mega?â she asked
âOh⦠he had a sudden urge of chocolate and went for a walk to the corner shop⦠I tried to stop him but, when he wants something he doesnât stop until he gets it.
âOâ¦oh⦠is that soâ said Emer nervously âahh, should I show you to your room thenâ she finished. |
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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| this suks a little |
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By: bubs_4_eva
19/04/2008
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well it looks like heroes remains exclusive to RBlost,
better effects there anyway lol |
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By: lostoholic_fan
20/04/2008
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Oh bubs I'm reading but just not commenting!! I'll start now.
First of all great job! can't wait to see where it's all going, are you going to have series finale's like me to get more readers into it??
The Exclusive to RBForums was a good idea, coz it was just your close friends reading it, not many people read LMBS about probably 6 or 7, but I still write.
Don't think that no one is reading, coz they are.
GREAT JOB!!!
Losto. |
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By: bubs_4_eva
21/04/2008
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nah im stopping because the text is bugging up.. or is it just my computer that bugs up?
yeah a season finale would be good.. not sure how i would do that.. the latest ep posted on RBlost would of been great for a finale but its a bit late now...
thanks for the comments but unfortunatly if the text dosn't fix up then i cant post :-(
sorry guys |
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By: roach_on_toast
1/05/2008
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| sorry to intrude, had a job to do. |
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By: megadabo7
13/07/2008
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| and what a "job" it was |
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By: megadabo7
13/07/2008
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| and I tells ya it was good |
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By: megadabo7
13/07/2008
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| Cmon bubs whats happening here |
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By: punzie13
24/12/2008
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| for us two to share |
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| sleep once more...... |
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