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the tittle was lostos idea, so i didin't steal it.
i've been posting this on my forums latly and i thought i would post a few eps on here jsut to see how it goes because i don't think im doing to well and im slowly stopping and running out of ideas mainly becuase im trying not to follow the same line of the TV show..
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EPISODE 1-pilot
'When the truth is found to be lies
And all the joy within you dies
Don't you want somebody to love
Don't you need somebody to love'
a young, teenage girl with light brown hair dances across the kitchen
"Wouldn't you love somebody to love!
You better find somebody to love!"
she sings
she hears a bang and turns down the music on the cd player at the end of the bench
thump a smile turns into a smirk and she walks out of the kitchen, through the lounge room, past the front door and up the stairs. when she reaches the top she goes past at least 12 rooms before reaching the end
she opens the door to reveal a bunch of loud kids running around like crazy, some turn around and look at her, some dont.
"luke!" a kid turns "put jacob down!" she orders,the kids arms flop down and a kid falls from the roof, he gets up a staggers around
"LOSTO! NO FIRES!!" she screams
"sorry emer" he replies dis-igniting his hand (is that a word?)
a doorbell rings she turns her head and then gazes back in at the herd of kids and waves her hand slowly accross the room and they all went quiet even though they where trying to speak
"behave or you wont talk for the rest of the day.. we have travellers" she warned
emer dashes down the stairs and opens the door
"Hi! welcome to scootors travelers inn Australia! please come in..."
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ding ding; a door opens at a small shop and two teenagers walk in, the boy turned around and lookd at the kids out the front he then turned to the girl next to him and noded.
the girl dashd to the front of the shop and ran into a sun glasses stand maing it fall to the ground
"oh damn! sh1t! im soo sorry ill clean it up"
she exclaimed as the a man behind the counter came around to help clean it up
"thats alright miss, here ill pick this up, you got that?" they picked up the rack and startd putting the glasses back on the rack
"wait" the man looked at the girl and her eyes widen ... |
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A late teend boy walks across the hot dirt of outback australia. we stops with his hands in his pockets and gazed around at the mirages of water. the wind picks up and a girl falls from the sky and lands on her feet, he turns quickly
"CHARLIE! what are you doing here!?" he grouches
"BRETT! what are you doing here!?... mum said you where buying christmas presents for everyone, why are you out here then? hmmmmmmmmm?"
"go away! i've already bought presents and i dont need to explain my self to my 13 year old sister!"
he turned to walk in the oppiste direction she hoverd up over him and landed softly infront of him. he raised an eyebrow (.... lol) and tehn stomped his foot. the ground where she was standing lifted several feet into the air taking her with it! he walked around the disturbance and kept walking, he then flicked his wrist and the dirt fell back down, but she stayed hovering above. she landed next to him and walked with him
"fine" she began "im sorry for invading your personal..space" she said looking around at nothingness "especially considering your going through a hard time with all the, girlfriend stuff"
he turned his head and lookd at her
"anyway, mum said that if i sore you while i was out with my friends, that i should tell you 'you need to come home now,diners ready'"
"ok" he said "lets go"
"race ya!" charlie screamd as she launched into the air, brett shock his head, raised his hands and then pushed them down fast, which launched him into the air.
charlie flew head first in the direction she was heading whilst brett had to keep raising his hands and pushing the down to re launch himself while he was in mid air which made it almost impossible for him to win! |
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By: bubs_4_eva
7/04/2008
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Episode 1- Part 2
a women walked from the lounge room to the kitchen and dropd some plates into the sink which was full of water and began to wash them. while she washed and humed she heard the rushing noices of kids, a few seconds later a girl popd around the corner crying
"AUNTY!! tyler stole my brats doll!!" she screechd. the boy came running around the corner
"shes lying mum! shes always trying to get me in trouble!!" argued the boy
the mother stood still, probably hoping there sight was only focused on movment and that they would evntully walk away. but they didnt so she spoke after eyeing one to the other
"so whys the doll in your hand?" the mother asked tyler. the boy lookd down at his hand to see the doll
"thats lying tyler, its bad"she added.
the boy tilted his head up "does it look like i give a sh1t?!" he cursed. the mother stared at him with wide eyes, not beliving what came out of her 7 years old's mouth
"you are so grouned young man!" she startd charging at him and he droped the doll and backd off and then eventully ran for his room, the girl had already pickd up the doll and ran to her room
"im so scard... 'loocy'... MORE LIKE LOONY!" (sorry about this loocy) he screamd as he slamed his door shut.
she startd charging at his door but tripd on lounge room rug and smashd her head on the coffee table. when she awoke, what felt like, seconds later, her head was thumping asnd she could see through her blurred vision that her head was bleeding, she raised her hand to feel her head but noticed she still had one of the glasses she was washing in her hands, it had eaither broken on the fall or when she was angrey, whatever the case she was bleeding heaps. Loocy stumbeld into the barthroom and rinced her and whilst she lookd at her head in the mirror, she leaned closed and sore a beice of the coffee table sticking out and once she had pulled that out of her head the wound began to shrink until it was perfectly fine. she grind one side o ... |
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7/04/2008
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~~~~~THIS GOES BETWEEN THE FIRST AND SECOND POST~~~~~
(it got cut off)
"i know you! your that theif! your not aloud in here! im calling the cops!" he yelled
"RUN KYOL!" the girl screamd as the man grbed her wrist
"what?! your brother! where is he you little *** s!" said the cashier
a lightning suddenly hit the glasses stand and the cashier lost grip of the girl and within a second she was out the front.
kyol and the girl helped the kids out the front onto their bikes and the cashier sore kyol handing the girl some things that he had stolen. the cashier startd running for them and they all rode off except the girl who did not have a bike, the cashier slammed the door open (ding ding) and stared at her, kyol turnd around
"stop playing games with him kelly! just run!"
he orderd. so kelly turned and ran letting dust drift down and out running the bikers within seconds.
a few minutes later they arrived at a big shed that lookd a bit run down.
they droped there bags and bikes and took a seat on boxes and crates, a few of them out of breath. kyol pulled a bottle of water out of his bag, took a sip and past it on, the boy took a sip past it on and said "when do we get to do stuff like that? where always sitting on the side lines!"
kyol and kelly both went to talk at the same time but kelly was the dominent voice that continued
"well, your only 8 jjj, i'd say about another year or 2 and you'll be out there like us, and lochlans 7 and little mikaela is only 5... that cover it?"
jjj nods, turns into a dog and runs down to the other end of the factory.
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CONTINUE OF PART 2.......
she grind one side of her face and tehn began to pull the glass out of her hand.
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ding ding ding
a late teen girl in a fairy costume was on a stage dinging(lol) her glass
"can i have you attention please?" she asked as the music was lowerd and the crowd in a varity of costumes turned to face her
"ok well i thoughtit was that time of the night. the time for a speech on jessicas birthday and time for cake!", the crowd cheerd
"so i'd like to say happy 19th jess! your now an oldy! and well.. as your best friend ill be there on your best and worst day but i think everyone else wishs you the best!" everyone clapped, cheerd and whistld
"time for cake!!" the girl in the fairy outfit cheerd. a man dressed in a nija outfit watchd silently and as soon as the cake as rolled out the lightes went off, leaving only the candle light. a few murmers where sent acros the room discussing what had happend to the power and then the braking of glass and thesound of a strugle was heard a few seconds later the lights turned on the birthday girl was gone and so was the ninja man.
"wheres jess?" the girl on stage asked
everyone turned to the back and then the front
"rach! the door behind youis open!" a girl in a turtle costume yelled
"she probable went to see the power box" the fairy girl, rach, said
"ill go check if shes out there" the turtle girl said as she walked out. rach had only just startd to pick up a chair when she heard a scream outside. so she lead the running pack outside to see what was going on and when she arived she sore the birthday girl laying face first on the ground with her dress ripped and a giant needel sticking out her back
"oh my god" rach exclaimd whilst people cryed and gasped.
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By: bubs_4_eva
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"please take a seat" said emer to the two male guests in her lounge room
"so what can i help you with??" she asked
"are you like the manager or something?" asked the the man on the left
"oh no my mum owns this place, i live here, dont worry i know what im doing" she explained
"oh great!" said the man "lovley place... where just looking for a weekend here, then where on out way to canada!" said the man on the right
"exciting! well the prices are cheap, $58 per night, per room and we supplie the food for free on the first night, and thats breakfast lunch and dinner, after that its $10 per meal per person" she explaind
"brilliant we'll take a room for the two nights then" said the man on the right jumping out of his seat, the man on the left then slowly followd.
"good, oh but i must tell you there are a few kids that live her, as like a foster home, but i weill try to restrict them and keep them quiet" confessed emer
"no problem we dont mind kids. well my name is eedrah and this is my older brother mega" explaind eedrah streeching out his hand
emer looked cautious of it at first but then shock it and as soon as her flesh touched his her eyes flashed, she saw a eedrah as a child saking in his sleep, then when he was bit older talking to his brother, mega;
"what do you mean future?" mega asked
"i mean when i fall asleep i have dreams and when i wake up my dreams come to life... like the future"
"its probably deja-vu" mega argued but still unsure
"trust me! but this is our secrete!"
mega lookd down at the carpet he sat on and nodded and then looked up slowly
"i have a secret too" he said
emer saw another flash this time she was sore eedrah watching a apartment burn and then him going back there the next day to find someboady had died she then sore him wake up and walk to school where he saw the apartment on fire. he ran inside and draged out a middle aged women out and then ran off when the medical cre ... |
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7/04/2008
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THE END OF PART 2...
medical crew got to her. she saw another flash and heard a large wooshing noice and a green and brown list was put in her face. it listed a single tick box then it read "Precognition" and then a box with a picture of eedrah. the checkbox was ticked and then the list diappeard. emer shook her head and came to her sences and looked at eedarah who still seemd happy and normal. |
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By: bubs_4_eva
8/04/2008
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Episode 2- fight and flight
kelly and kyol sat at the top of a bunch of crates. kelly was just lounging around and kyol was sitting upright watching the younger kids playing ps2. it was a little chily but the kookaburras where still laughing.
kelly and kyol suddenly sat upwards and the kids turnd
"did you hear that?" asked kyol
"yea" answerd kelly
"what is this? twin intuition?" asked jjj
kelly and kyol looked at each other.
"its nothing" said kelly "hey kids come here" they all troted up to her and she whisperd in there ears and then said;
"i want yous to go up stairs and grab that game" they all nodded and ran up the stairs. kelly and kyol both stood up and looked each other they then turned to face the crates near the entrance. kelly turned to kyol and nodded kyol then took a step forward and raised his arms in the air after a second he tensed his arms and ligtning came shooting out of his fingre tips and hit the walls and some of the crates. a few armed men jumped up and shook there hands to relive the pain of the electrcution.
"i got it now, make sure the kids got the exit open" said kelly
"make there heads spin" said kyol as he pulled the fingre at the cops and ran for the stairs at the back of the factory/shed
some of the police raised there guns at kyol as he ran "OI!" shouted kelly, they all turned "come and get me" they all startd taking steps forward and she ran to the side of the room
"where you going? im over here" she teased they took steps to the side and she ran to the other side "are you blind? im over here" they all lookd confused and some startd runnin for her. she ran to the back of them "you have big butts and i can not lie!" she half sang. one of the cops turned to run for her but was striked down with lightning. kelly looked up to see kyol on the stairs.
"noting lethal" she said and he smiled. he startd tauntin them by striking in front of there feet whilst kelly taunted a few others by running around them and making ... |
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them lost and dizey until one pulled out a gun and shot it in the air, kyol quickly zaped the gun out of his hands and kelly and kyol desided it was time to go so kelly distracted them whilst kyol ran up the stair, and then kelly joind him seconds later at what lookd like a mini cool room on the ground. kyol opend it and climbed inside sliding down, kelly followed him seconds later and then poped outinto the sunshine a few seconds after that where the 3 kids where waiting axiously.
"whats happend?" askd lochlan
"we heard gunfire" added jjj
"its ok, just go" answerd kyol as he picked up lochlan and kelly picked up mikaela
"we've got to get to the doctor that called you" said kelly to kyol
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luke and losto sat in the room quietly whilst the younger kids played in the background
"hmm im thirsty." said losto sounding bored
"me too, " said luke
"ill go get us a water bottle then" said losto tiredly
as he walkd down the stairs he could hear the chatter between the travelers and emer. when he got to the bottem and went around the corner her could see them. he saw eedrah, then emer and once emer moved to the left he saw mega and stopped in his traks, widend his eyes and then bolted up the stairs.
"what was that?" askd mega
"one of the kids" emer grunted
losto bursted back into the room at the end of the hall
"ahh did you forget something?" asked luke sarcastically
"hes here" replied losto out of breath
"whos here?" asked luke
"the guy that guy was talking about"
"that made alot of sence"
"ahh, that guy that called us a couple of days ago, about US and sent us that picture of the guy who hunts people like US, yea well the guy in that photo is here! the hunter!" |
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8/04/2008
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"what?! here!? are you sure?!"
"positive! saw him myself!"
"did you..." luke was cut off by emer bursting through the door
"what are yous doing running up and down the stairs like monkeys?!" she said as she confronted losto and luke
"hes here emer! the one we where told about!" panicked losto
"what?! where?"
"downstairs you where just talking to him!" replied losto. emer looked a little confused and luke startd going through his pockets
"here look!" luke pulled out a peice of paper and handed it to emer
"omg.. thats mega, we've got to get yous out of here" emer said
emer flicked her hand towards the window and it opend
"i'll be back in a minute, stay here and quiet, if they come in just act normal and take them to another room" explaind emer, they both nodded
"hey emer! dont get seen!" said one of the kids at the back of the room.
"i wont" winked emer then she ran for the window, jumped and flew off somewhere else
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"nice painting" said eedrah
"yea, i like how its got the, ah, the..things there and the, ahh..... yea it looks good" replied mega
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"hey brett! wana play catch?" asked charlie in there backyard
"you? wana play catch?" asked brett suspeciously
"care to join?"asked charlie, brett just got up sluggishly and joind her in the middle of the yard. charlie bounced the ball once in her hand and then lifted her arm the throw it when emer landed in the middle of them
"woah!" exclaimd brett
"we have a problem, and i need your help" said emer. emer spent the next minute haistly explaining the situation at the motel/hotel and she was very clear on the fact that she might be over reacting
"i usally wouldnt ask for help, id do it myself, but becuas eim not completely sure and we could be over reacting i think i should stay at the motel, at least until my mum gets back in a hour or so. because she would never forgive me if i was all wrong and gave our place a bad name. please will yo ... |
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take them to him!" emer finished
"you dont need to beg, we'll be happy too" said brett looking at charlie as she gave him the look of approval.
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"it only takes 30seconds to get there, shes been gone... 7minutes!" worried luke
emer and charlie came flying through the window closely followd by brett and his dodgy landing
"you got this?" ask emer to charlie
"yea go, before he gets suspecious, and be safe!" answerd charlie
"hey! pyro boy" greeted brett to losto as they gave a firey high 5
"nice to see you brimstone!"
"god i hate that name" laughed brett
"ok emer said only to take yous to(refering to luke and losto) the rest of you have to stay quiet all right? no telling anyone what they acn do" charlie told the rest
"ok lets go" said brett grabing losto and charlie grabed luke as they took off out the window. |
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10/04/2008
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5 stars, clearly, this is one of the best films I have seen in years ...... and by that, I mean story, losto has some competition here folks.
No whipping for me now that I remembered haha |
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By: bubs_4_eva
12/04/2008
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| haha thanks kyol |
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12/04/2008
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Goin very well Bubs!!!.
Competition Kyle!!!!! loll... |
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| you have been busy |
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| ooo this is good bubs |
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| Just need some popcorn and a supersize Coke, sit back and enjoy the rest when are you posting more Bubs |
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14/04/2008
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=D
well Rblost(my forums) are ahead of youse (like ameria and aussi) so i've got the next ep ready to go and ill post it now
=D thanks for the comments |
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Episode 2- fight and flight: part 2
âSARAH! Your mothers here!â screamed loocy from the front door
âOk!â she screamed from upstairs
Loocy opened her front door to see a lady out the front
âHey loocyâ
âHey microâ
âHow was she? Well behaved?â
Loocy rolled her eyes and nodded
âWay better then my kidâ replied loocy
âMisbehaving again? You know it may just be because heâs got less of his father these daysâ suggested micro
Loocy nodded as she turned to watch Sarah run down the stairs with her backpack. When she reached the bottom loocy kissed her on the head
âBe good and Iâll see you next timeâ she said. Sarah nodded and looked up at her mum
âHey darling⦠go wait in the car ok Iâll be there in a minuteâ micro and loocy watched her trot off to the car parked on the side of the road. âI got a phone call the other day from this man, loocy, he said to careful because thereâs a guy out there tracking people like us down⦠tracking us down and killing us.â Micro warned
âI know. I got that phone call too. He gave me the address to his safe house as wellâ loocy explained
âYou going to go?â asked micro
âIf I need toâ
There was a bit of a silence
âWell, ill see you in a few weeks or somethingâ said micro as she turned to depart
âOk then... Be safe and call if anything happens!â replied loocy as she waved goodbye.
Loocy let out a sigh of relief as she sat and absorbed the silence on her couch when she remembered she still had another kid in the house. She closed her eyes and relaxed for another few seconds but eventually fell asleep, she woke up 10 minutes later and looked at the time that was located under the TV, sheâd been asleep for 22minutes. Loocy rubbed her hands on her face and sat up and looked into the TV where she saw a tall darkly dressed man towering over her. She jumped up and turned around quickly where she saw the man staring at her, his face was too shade ... |
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shaded to see any features.
She picked up the lamp beside her, later realizing it was a stupid idea because it wouldnât go far whilst it was plugged in.
âWho are you?â loocy asked
âI am⦠your enemyâ he replied in a deep voice âthe bad side of your pleasant situation. May I as-â loocy hit him across the face with the lamp. He grabbed his face in pain but straightened up slowly and calmly
âOWWWww!â he complained still in his deep voice. Loocy swung again but he leaned backwards and she couldnât reach him. He laughed and punched her across the face and she went flying across the room and hit the wall, sliding to the ground smothered in blood.
âTo easyâ he said in a heartless voice as he stepped over to her mangled body.
He was about to lean down to her when he heard the pitier-pater of feet and slowly turned to the hallway where Tyler appeared
âHello there little boy. Do you have a name?â He asked
âMum?! What did you do?!â Tyler screamed
âYou didnât answer my questionâ the mysterious man said
âHeres your answer! AHHHHHH!â Tyler started charging for him
âTyler no!â screamed loocy from the wall
The man turned quickly âwhat the-â BANG! The man was knocked down by Tyler dressed in a metal exoskeleton. Loocy got up slowly,
âTyler come hereâ said loocy stretching out her arms
âMUM!â Tyler cried as he hugged her
âCome on, lets go before he wakesâ suggested loocy
âDonât you want to see his face?â Asked Tyler as stumbled for the door
âNo we should just leave come on, grab your coatâ she replied as she guided him out the door and grabbed her keys. |
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| nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! |
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ITS IN ANOTHER LANGAUGE AGAIN!! DAMN YOU YAHOO7!
well this suks... |
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âDonât you want to see his face?â Asked Tyler as stumbled for the door
âNo we should just leave come on, grab your coatâ she replied as she guided him out the door and grabbed her keys. |
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| GRRRRRR!!!! |
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