By: jjjrox49
28/03/2008
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| I present prison break uncut. lol just a made up version of me but got the exact same storyline as the show just different character names and a tiny bit different. |
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By: jjjrox49
28/03/2008
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"My name is Nathan Rentford my brother has been sentenced to death for a crime that he did not commit. Someone wants him dead, they set him up real good. I got married yesterday and today i got to do a crime, I am going to rob a bank, not for money but to get into prison, the prison I designed, the prison with the blueprints on my body, the prison where my brother is. I wish nothing had happened, all my friends that I am gonna leave behind all the trouble I might get in at prison, Fox River Penitantiary in Chicago Illinois. I say sorry in this journal I am writing sorry to my wife, to my friends and to many more of what crime I am gonna do when I break out".
Greenfield bank was located on 25th street Chicago, Nathan walked in and up to a lady at the counter she said brightly "What can I do for you today"?. He sighed and said "Give me five million dollars". She laughed and asked brightly "Do you have that much in your account or no, you coming to rob this bank, you got a gun or something"? Nathan laughed loudly "Yeah I do! Where is it"?! he pointed the gun directly at her heart, she gulped and gasped over here and directed him into a room. When Nathan turned his back a man ran out Nathan shot towards the door but to late. The man must've got his phone out and rang the police and by the time the lady had the money the cops had arrived arrested him, then he was incarcarated where he wanted to be, Fox River Prison in Illiois, where his brother was. |
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By: jjjrox49
28/03/2008
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| 2 months after that after breaking out of fox river with his brother dominic and 6 other men Nathan is incarcerated at Penetencria De Sona in Panama. |
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By: jjjrox49
28/03/2008
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| Dominic was exonarated and 3 of the men that escaped died. another one was exonarated, another will shortly be incarcarated at the same prison that nathan is in now and 1 is still on the run from US feds, but he fled to Panama |
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By: jjjrox49
28/03/2008
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Nathan was standing out in the heavy rain. A fierce fight was going on. Someone next to him muttered "Welcome to Sona"! Right after that the black man fighting had just snapped the other mans neck. People were cheering some groaning. This was entertainment in Sona and the other inmates put bets on who would win the fights. Everyone else went undercover but Nathan stayed at the mans body speechless dreading his stay at Sona. The next morning Nathan woke up to hear an inmate cleaning something which made a s cra.ping noise, he crossed the courtyard to check out the place when he stopped. He saw Ben Bell a guard at Fox River, Ben was looking very bad and thirsty he was being bullied by some gang and was splashed dirty water in his face, Nathan avoided him. Twenty minutes after Nathan arrived an annoucnement was made by one of the guars saying that he had a visitor. It was Dominic. "Hey" said Dominic. Nathan was happy that he was seeing his brother but wished he was on the other side of the fence with his brother. "Hey, how are you"? Dom sighed and said "Good, your getting out of here tommorow". Nathan said "What"?
"Transfer, Dom replied, Just hang on one more day". Nathan turned to walk back and then said see you tommorow. As Nathan was walking back across the courtyard he was accosted by the youngest person in the prison who looked around seventeen. He just bombarded Nathan about basketball in America, Michael Jordan, Cheerleaders and all the teams. He even passed Nathan the ball but suddenly grabbed it out of his hands and ran. Nathan turned to see a black man with a gang come up to him and say "Come on blanco, Orientacion". Nathan looked at him and said definantly
"I'm not intrested". The man showed a shank and said calmly "Thats not for you to decide". So Nathan followed the gang up to a room at the top floor. |
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By: jjjrox49
28/03/2008
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| i'll do more tomoz |
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By: jjjrox49
29/03/2008
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| When Nathan got to the right room, there was a man standing inside doing aerobics with what looked like a prostitute. He said "Come over here" to Nathan. Nathan walked over he noticed the woman was checking him out. "Welcome to Sona, your American right"? said the black man. Nathan didnt answer and just stood there. The man let out a laugh and said "Of course! NATHAN RENTFORD! A superstar in the US, but you are NOT A SUPERSTAR HERE! I run things here ok, NOW GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE"! Nathan left, he looked one more time at the man and noticed again the prostitute was checking him out. |
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By: megadabo7
13/04/2008
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| how many stories do you start and not complete |
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By: roach_on_toast
1/05/2008
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| lots I think |
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By: megadabo7
13/07/2008
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| there goes the shoes |
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By: micro_lost
13/07/2008
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| you stripping ..mega? |
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